For the record, the writing in the Fourth World books improves notably as it goes on, I think. It's never *great*, but it gets less utterly ridiculous. And some of the books are significantly better than others. I think "New Gods" was definitely the best of the three/four books, actually well-written in parts, and "The Forever People" starts pretty dumb but gets decent. In "New Gods", especially, Kirby really starts to get a handle on how to play to his strengths, i.e., by having his characters shut up and letting the pictures do the talking. Also, when Stan Lee isn't writing him, the subtext in Kirby's books starts to get a little richer and more interesting. Stan may have been better at dialogue, but he tended to keep everything pretty superficial.
Jimmy Olsen is pretty lame throughout the series, though. It's usually lame in a hilarious, interesting way, but it's always lame.
Now is the point for me to plug the series of posts I'm doing on the Fourth World
on my blog. It starts
here.