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Originally Posted by Parker 
I just have a problem judging any art by comparing what the author intended to do (or the inspiration) and the outcome. Talk to Woody Allen and he'll tell you that he feels like he screwed up almost every one of his films because he intended them to be about one thing and they ended up being something else (or critics and analysts deemed it so). Doesn't make them bad works of art.
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I agree on this. Intentionality is a minor factor, at best, especially when it comes to something potentially impressionistic like many rock lyrics.
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| Honestly, when I listen to Devil's Haircut, I picture a really hot, hazy, gloomy day in LA. I think Beck captures the languid insanity of modern city life better than anybody. If my interpretation isn't the same as his inspiration, does it make it an inferior song? I don't think so, but that's just me. |
My problem is that Beck uses a lot of lazy images to make that vague impression and doesn't really do much to tie them together. Dead ends, dropping temperatures (which calls into question the idea of a hot day, actually), lepers, decapitated heads, guns, and eyeball gouging in the first verse, the sexual imagery that every two-bit songwriter eventually associates with a debauched city like L.A. in the second, allusions to standard rock song tropes in the third. Other songwriters have gotten across the same sort of atmospherics, but actually bothered to imbue the lyrics with more than cliches and gaudy imagery.
Then, a chorus that doesn't add any kind of evocative imagery to the mix, because "devil's haircut" doesn't carry any sort of stable meaning. It might lead to an interesting question or two ("why is this devil's haircut only in his mind and not manifested in reality on his or on someone else's head?"), but the nonsensical, disjoined nature of the rest of the lyrics strongly suggest that these are just more words for the sake of words - it's a chorus, after all. You need to sing
something over it.
I think you can use this sort of cut-up technique pretty well in pop songwriting. Bowie's made a career of it, after all. In fact, that may be my problem. Bowie's version of it involves layering bizarre, juxtaposed phrases over a consistent musical base. There's struggle there between order and disorder. With Beck, so much of his better music is pastiche-based to begin with, that it's just a bunch of disassociated parts interacting (and when his music is less pastiche-based, as on Sea Change or even on Guero, it's just kind of boring, as flyarz mentioned). There's no struggle there. I'm just hypothesizing on my own taste here, incidentally. I'm not sure if that's exactly why I lost the taste for Beck over the years.