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I want to address this specifically. The way Hollywood works is that you HAVE to break in by writing original material not affiliated with copywritten characters or stories. The studio might not like your script, but maybe they'll like you, or your style. They will then purchase your script, never make it, and hire you for another assignment, which will then be some sort of adaptation. Maybe it will be for a book, maybe for the A-Team or something- bottom line, when it comes to pre-established properties, you don't pick them, they pick you. Until then, you have to be lucky. If you ever have a script sold in Hollywood, you can then tell the studio, "Oh, you were fond of my work, well, I notice you own Animal Man, could I possibly get a shot at that script? Here's my vision..."

I would suggest having your lawyer around for that last part.

If someone who's had a screenplay made into a film around here knows better than I do, please correct me.
actually, this is a very useful comment...I was actually curious...one of my contigency plans for this script would be to send it DC and maybe try to position myself as trying to get a writing gig in the comic industry(that would be just as exciting for me)

anyways, after I am finished with the superman script..I will work on something completely original..I have some ideas...that MMA thing could be a good piece of work...I am actually more excited about writing that than finishing this superman script(but I have to write this)

So, in the biz, they wouldn't even look at a novices take on an established character? Even if its just out of blind curiosity?
post #52 of 84
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Btw, I sat down for a bit and thought about orginal ideas for scripts that I would be passionate about...given the fact that the season just started..and I have a true passion for it...I want to make a hockey movie called "blood and guts"
post #53 of 84
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Just curious Slater, did Oliver Stone get noticed in this industry by essentially being a co-writer or developmental writer....he did co-write Conan..no? How about John Landis?
I think John Landis got started as a PA/extra in Battle for the Planet of the Apes. So, fingers crossed!
post #54 of 84
I think that someone needs to read this. And when you're done with that, here's the thread, which also contains some good advice.

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Writing film scripts is very different from writing novels or journalism or any other kind of writing. This is because it's not really writing. It's a PLAN. Like an Architects Plan. The dialogue is the only bit that really survives, and even that gets changed by the Director or the Actor or both. So if you want to write and have what you write filmed exactly, then you have to Write and Direct. Lots of people want to do this, but God made very few creatures who are able to do this. This is because the personalities of Writers and Directors are so different: and even when such a person exists, usually one side of that person fails in the end. Unless they are one of the few i.e. A BRILLIANT ONE.

Anyway, back to writing scripts. There are people who write and re-write scripts their whole lives, get paid bucketfuls of wonga (money), and may never have had one of their scripts turned into a movie. This is strange but true. These people are usually rich when they are middle aged, and pissed off. They only live in Hollywood; other countries in the world don't appear to support this species. You could be one of these people if you like to read scripts, then go to meetings and say in a knowledgeable and forceful manner why it doesn't work and then suggest better ideas which you, naturally, would write after your Agent has asked for a suitable 6 figure sum. I guess the people who do this job started by writing original scripts, or adapting books and then got employed by Studios. Most of them have degrees in English Literature
My Degree in English Literature may turn out to be useful after all.
post #55 of 84
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I would actually like for Kevin Smith to take a look at it when I finish. Considering he is an actual comic book fan and all..did anyone read his Superman script from the 90's? Was it any good?

No.
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I vaguely remember reading that. Did it have a gay robot and Supes fighting a polar bear?
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Btw, I sat down for a bit and thought about orginal ideas for scripts that I would be passionate about...given the fact that the season just started..and I have a true passion for it...I want to make a hockey movie called "blood and guts"
Then stick Supes on the back-burner and write this. BUT - and you seem to dismiss it as a triviality - get formatting software or download a formatter for your word processor. Don't write another word until you do that because you're just wasting time as you'll have to rewrite everything and you'll find that a lot of stuff has to be changed simply due to the different formatting. If you're serious about pursuing this, then those (as well as every other suggestion in this thread) are things you have to do FIRST, not LAST.
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Celtx.com

Free download. Do it.
This is a pretty nice program, BTW.
post #59 of 84
You should probably be paying close attention to Slater's advice. He's been on the blacklist, and I believe has 2 scripts in production right now. Generally, if you're trying to break into any professional field, the guys who are currently doing this for a living are the best people to listen to.
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So, in the biz, they wouldn't even look at a novices take on an established character? Even if its just out of blind curiosity?
No. And not just because they don't give a shit. They will never, EVER read your script, because they can't risk making a Superman movie only to have you sue them, claiming they ripped off your ideas. The best case scenario is that they return your script unopened with a note explaining they don't accept unsolicited materials. The more likely scenario has you being hit with a cease-and-desist from WB's lawyers, since you're attempting to make a profit using one of their characters.

In either case, you're wasting your time. If you're serious about this, go download 50 screenplays and read them front to back. That's a pretty good place to start.
post #61 of 84
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No. And not just because they don't give a shit. They will never, EVER read your script, because they can't risk making a Superman movie only to have you sue them, claiming they ripped off your ideas. The best case scenario is that they return your script unopened with a note explaining they don't accept unsolicited materials. The more likely scenario has you being hit with a cease-and-desist from WB's lawyers, since you're attempting to make a profit using one of their characters.

In either case, you're wasting your time. If you're serious about this, go download 50 screenplays and read them front to back. That's a pretty good place to start.

Alright , now we are getting productive...so, in essence, it could be a great script but because of the material in question the won't take the risk...I totally understand...thank you for your candor..

It looks like the hockey script is the way to go..and I have been brain storming the hell out of that...

I am little dissapointed because I really thought I could do something really special with Superman...guess its just not pragmatic...

Slater, could I just finish that superman script send it to DC and see if they would be interested in converting it to like a graphic novel or something?

I like where this thread is heading...its becoming very illuminating..

Btw, I have been reading screenplays forever...I am already ahead of the ball there..
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Then stick Supes on the back-burner and write this. BUT - and you seem to dismiss it as a triviality - get formatting software or download a formatter for your word processor. Don't write another word until you do that because you're just wasting time as you'll have to rewrite everything and you'll find that a lot of stuff has to be changed simply due to the different formatting. If you're serious about pursuing this, then those (as well as every other suggestion in this thread) are things you have to do FIRST, not LAST.
I don't dismiss it as a triviality I just haven't downloaded it yet...I will later today..no worries..
post #63 of 84
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Slater, could I just finish that superman script send it to DC and see if they would be interested in converting it to like a graphic novel or something?
I don't think DC accepts unsolicited material either. For the same legal reasons.
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I've been fuckin' around with the program for the past few hours. Pretty sweet once you get used to the format and shortcuts.
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I don't think DC accepts unsolicited material either. For the same legal reasons.
Jeesh, so how the hell do comic writers break in then? Do they invent their own characters?
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Jeesh, so how the hell do comic writers break in then? Do they invent their own characters?
It's a really insular industry. You kind of have to be born into it or know someone.

Or have some kind of professional training.
post #67 of 84
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Jeesh, so how the hell do comic writers break in then? Do they invent their own characters?
Like someone said earlier - you get in the door with original ideas and then someone comes to you with an established property. Or, if nothing else, make a name on your own accord and then pursue the established stuff.
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It's a really insular industry. You kind of have to be born into it or know someone.

Or have some kind of professional training.
sounds like alot of unncessary nepotism...like american politics in an odd way..
post #69 of 84
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Question: I can still do a H.P. Lovecraft script though..just because he is considered to be public domain?
post #70 of 84
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Just curious, is anyone curious to work as a co-writer editor...I am probably going to get cracking the next couple of days...although I probably get some source material or referencing stuff..
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Just curious, is anyone curious to work as a co-writer editor...
Work implies payment.
post #72 of 84
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well you would recieve none from me good sir...since you have to have money to give it.. Nope, this would be a mutual investment where both would recieve credit on the scipt and if it got optioned.... money down the road. Obviousily, I can't pay upfront, since I'm not getting paid upfront..
post #73 of 84
This guy can't be for real. He's like Fleed's cojoined twin.
post #74 of 84
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It's a really insular industry. You kind of have to be born into it or know someone.

Or have some kind of professional training.
And lots of handjobs.
post #75 of 84
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Jeesh, so how the hell do comic writers break in then? Do they invent their own characters?
I know that artists can build up portfolios of original work, as well as maybe a couple of established characters in their own style that they can show to companies like DC and Marvel. Comic conventions like Wizard World have submission sessions during that they set up during the con that allow folks from all over to bring their portfolios for critiqueing. I know DC and Aspen ask that you only show your art depictions of their characters. They will refuse any originals.

Writing is a little different, however. I seem to recall this question being asked in an issue of Wizard once and the mag posed the question to Quesada, I believe. His response was along the lines of having several writing samples that you can send to them for review. If memory serves, it can be in various formats - prose, script, news article. And there are times when the big two will put up offers through Wizard or another venue that give writers a brief synopsis involving character A, B and a setting and ask writers who want to submit to do a 3 - 5 page script pased on the criteria.

Either way, the key is to keep you eyes and ears open to opportunities such as these if you wanna try getting into the comic book writing field.

Or, you can do what I've done and publish your own web comic. I'm in the middle of working on a deal right now to put the first 80 page story arc into print with a local publisher. One of the DC guys told me earlier this year that if you have a published product to show them that it can definitely help pique (I spelled that correctly) their interest in your talents. Well, as long as it's good, anyway.
post #76 of 84
I suggest purchasing "The Complete Guide to Standard Script Formats: The Sceenplay" by Haag and Cole.

It isn't a how to book by any means, it does however teach you proper format. Do that AND get solid screenwriting software, whether it be Final Draft or Movie Magic. Celtx is a good starting tool as well. But do learn the format before you rely on the software.

I'm not sure any of those "write a script in 60 days" type books are any real help. Go to script o rama, read what works.

Finally, you don't have to completely abandon Superman, what you need to do is find out what resonates with you from that character/story and see what you can build from that. It might not even be a superhero story you come up with...

Write some short films, find a friend with a digital camera and get them made. See what happens in between the page and the screen so to speak.

Just some thoughts.
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This guy can't be for real. He's like Fleed's cojoined twin.
They should get together and write a script. I'd read that.

Seriously, I want to see a GI Joe/Superman/Batman/A-Team mash up movie written by these two.

Word of advice: Stop using so many god damn periods.
post #78 of 84
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They should get together and write a script. I'd read that.

Seriously, I want to see a GI Joe/Superman/Batman/A-Team mash up movie written by these two.

Word of advice: Stop using so many god damn periods.
you aint the boss of me, I do what I want...If I wanna use incorrect grammar on a message board..well, so be it..

Btw, I thought fleed was like an alternate ego for Devin...

Just to tell you, I would rather do original ideas...sounds more challenging, stimulating, and fullfilling..

Although, I admit, I was REALLY passionate about the Superman thing
post #79 of 84
Wait, wait, wait. You just made me realize you have read the boards for awhile (the Fleed/Devin conspiracy), yet only have 35 posts - all but the first five in this thread.

Who were you?
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Wait, wait, wait. You just made me realize you have read the boards for awhile (the Fleed/Devin conspiracy), yet only have 35 posts - all but the first five in this thread.

Who were you?
nobody, I have been lurking these message boards for about....hmmm...5-6 years(that is what I guess ...might be a little bit longer)...

I just decided recently, with this scriptwriting thing that I may have something useful to say otherwise I just like to sit back and observe..

I do wish Nick was more involved...he never writes anything anymore...kinda lays back and maintains the website(I am sure it is a handful)...oh well
post #81 of 84
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d)The interview and courtship of Louis Lane?
So, it's a gay thing? I think Singer already did that.
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So, it's a gay thing? I think Singer already did that.
LOL, awesome..that was very funny, I meant Lois Lane. Although It would be hilarious to write a sketch about a gay superman trying to court Jimmy Olsen..
post #83 of 84
i'll chip in with some advice.

write somthing simple and cheap, find a freind or make freinds with a first time director, collaborate with them, make something indie-ish.

when the directors done making it, go with him to film festivals and try and get some kind of notice. 'cos you're never going to get anywhere just writing superman scripts. ever. you've got to produce your own work if your starting out blank, with no contacts in hollywood.

that or keep sending video game scripts to uwe boll and hope he reads one.
post #84 of 84
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i'll chip in with some advice.

write somthing simple and cheap, find a freind or make freinds with a first time director, collaborate with them, make something indie-ish.

when the directors done making it, go with him to film festivals and try and get some kind of notice. 'cos you're never going to get anywhere just writing superman scripts. ever. you've got to produce your own work if your starting out blank, with no contacts in hollywood.

that or keep sending video game scripts to uwe boll and hope he reads one.

That is excellent advice, I think another thing that needs to be said is that there are many approaches into the industry. I think an individual just needs to find the one that is most comfortable(and pragmatic)way to do so..
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