I enjoy your writing and encourage you to keep it up. I am not a fan of the rudeness that people use on the web. I am not mocking you or trying to look smart at your offense. There is a very good book called "Eats, Shoots and Leaves' that explains how to avoid some common typographical mistakes. There is another classic book called 'Elements of Style' that is essential. I mention this because your use of commas make it hard to understand what you mean sometimes.