Help with writting... Sex scene

Hi Flee,

I'd almost recommend watching the movie "Desert Hearts" (if you haven't already). The sex scene in there is pretty similar to what you're going for. I hear that they use it as the standard for alot of lesbian scenes since.

http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0089015/

If it's for a script you may try to sell, much like an action scene, probably the less description the better, while still getting the point across.

If it's for a short story/novel, you got me. Best of luck.

Welcome to the forum.

You should probably set it during a gun fight. It seems all the rage right now. I can't for the life of me figure out a practical way to stage it without wire-works and lots of scissoring, though.

But in all seriousness, Mr. Freeze and Nexus-7 know what they're talking about. Good luck and happy writing.

How the hell did it take a month for people hereabouts to chime in on the topic of a lesbian sex scene?

Or, you know, watch Rome In Rome, very similar situation/plot. And pretty boobies.

I'll pass on the best advice I've ever faked being given.

Write what you know.

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Originally Posted by Fleebee 

Hey everyone. I'm new to the forum. I'm stuck majorly!!! I started to write something and it involves a sex scene. I don't want it to be porn!

How can someone write that the main character is embarrassed about them self while having sex? Scene is this: two girls. Girl one falls asleep, girl two makes move while the other is sleeping. Girl two is open lesbian, girl one hasn't had first female sexual experience, but this embarrasses her during the process. Girl two opens girl one up sexually. How can this be conveyed? Need any all advise! XoXo ~ Flee

I have been writing a screenplay involving a lesbian couple and it is a sequel to the Exorcist. The scene is vital to the plot and features lesbian sex but is tasteful. IM me and I can send it to you.
 

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Originally Posted by David Morgan 

I have been writing a screenplay involving a lesbian couple and it is a sequel to the Exorcist. The scene is vital to the plot and features lesbian sex but is tasteful. IM me and I can send it to you. 

 

PM him, he is an amazing writer.