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SERIAL KILLING BEGINS!

post #1 of 34
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post #2 of 34
It does indeed, as you say... Rock.

I've always wondered why nobody ever did this in comic books.
post #3 of 34
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Where's the reaction? Goddam!
post #4 of 34
I read the first paragraph and didn't think it was very scary...then the rest chilled me. Good job! Where's the sequel, bub?

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I know there's a God because I kill vampires for a living. I just don't fucking understand Him.
post #5 of 34
Great job. Funny and creepy at the same time. Bring on the sequel!
post #6 of 34
Damn fine story there, Davey. I take it you read a lot of comic books as a little Davis, no? I liked it, it was very different then what I would've expected in a serial killer story. Is there going to be a sequel?

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post #7 of 34
thanks, y'all. glad you dig. and you want a sequel? more super serial killings? you people are just SICK!
post #8 of 34
Yes, definetly good story that begs for a sequel. Bad guys never win my ass! The part with the razorwire: damn what a lovely immage.
post #9 of 34
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Now there's another story up. MINE!
post #10 of 34
See? Now that's just wrong...
post #11 of 34
Nick... you are SICK, SICK man. We love you!
post #12 of 34
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I toned it down. A LOT.
post #13 of 34
Damn, Nick! I never knew you were such a sick fuck!
post #14 of 34
Heh....really good stuff.
post #15 of 34
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Micah said if his girlfriend read this tale she'd fear letting him hang out with me.

Does anyone else feel this way?

Just because it's my autobiagraphy doesn't mean it should change opinions of me, right?

Hello?
post #16 of 34
Nick... shocking... in a good way.
post #17 of 34
My wife doesn't even know I haunt CHUD. You be the judge...
post #18 of 34
Wow. That was pretty fucking intense, Nick.

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post #19 of 34
I finally had some time to read tonight and all the stories are great guys! Wonderful ideas and writing! Time well spent IMO
post #20 of 34
BTW, Nick, I was half-joking. She's knows we're sickos and she's fine with it.

I tried telling her the concept for MY upcoming serial killer tale, and her skin began crawling just listening to the plot summary.

Such is life.
post #21 of 34
Daniel, nice story. Very creepy. Hope this isn't a case of, erm, "write what you know."
post #22 of 34
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How's about these fuckin' stories, eh? Ken's is up now. Go eat them!
post #23 of 34
Thanks YT, and no I'm not an old man who obsesses over girls I meet at coffee shops.

..I am a young man that obsesses over girls I meet at coffee shops though.

Ok, only difference is I didn't kill anyone!
post #24 of 34
Mine is up too...only, it's not a serial killer story, as I am a loser and couldn't get it in in time.

But it's a story.

And it's on Creature Corner.

And it needs love.

So love it.

LOVE IT HARD! LOVE IT LIKE YOU LOVED TATTOO FROM FANTASY ISLAND! LOVE IT LIKE YOU LOVE MAX DUGAN RETURNS! LOVE IT LIKE YOU LOVE CARLA GUGINO'S LAZY EYE!

LOVE IT!!!
post #25 of 34
I loved it long and hard, friend, don't fret.

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post #26 of 34
I gave it love Grendel. Then took a break and went back and gave it more love.

Yeah, it's getting some love.

Ohhh.. yeah!
post #27 of 34
Grendel. LOVED it. You "twist ending" bastard, you!

Seriously. Good story. Requires being read twice.
post #28 of 34
Mikah's story is excellent. These puppies just keep coming!

Are we going to get a part 2?

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post #29 of 34
Hopefully......

It depends on a couple of things. Right now, tho, I have a fully realized storyline continuity and universe related to that plot, and if everything goes okay, there'll be more.

Thanks for reading, Johnny. I'm glad you liked it.

[This message has been edited by mikah912 (edited 12-17-2000).]
post #30 of 34
great stories all, you magnificent bastards!

dave davis: love it. rampant fanboy histeria abounds as you successfully do what every comic fan does when kibbutzing with his dork pals: destroy his heroes.

grendel: not a serial killa story, but you got me at the end. mild manner reporter saves the day. heh. cool.

nick: you are a sick sick man. good story. i wouldn't be worried about hanging with you in real life, but i'd be more wary if you ever use the term "my monster" in public. hmm.

still have to read micah's but more responses will be forthcoming. great job again, all.

/willko.
post #31 of 34
Nick: Loved your story, but am unable to find any of this purported "sickness" that everyone keeps referring to...

Can you enlighten me as to what these prudes are talking about? I mean, a little good healthy sex and they shudder like it's dirty or something...

And hey everybody, thanks for reading mine...if Nick is benevolent and patient with me I'll have 'Killers We' in to him in the next couple of days, seeing as how the wife is no longer in the hospital, thus leaving me free to gag her and get some writing time in...
post #32 of 34
Just read Vince's/Chennzo's - Nice.

"I once reeked of a teenage girl, but that is hardly the point."

Priceless line.
post #33 of 34
Thanks guy.

That was my favorite line as well.

not too bad, one good line out of 500 or so.

LOVED your story too, makes me wanna see what happens next. Totally different direction than I thought it was going.
post #34 of 34
Great stuff, indeed.

Dave's story is my favorite, but that's just because I have a *really* soft spot in my heart for intensely brutal superhero murders.
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