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post #501 of 512
Those are closer to prose poems than actual poetry.
post #502 of 512
my breath quickens as you touch my skin
your finger softly traces my nose
I close my eyes and wish for more.
You kiss my neck and tell me you love me

I sigh softly and want to believe you
these beautiful words you speak
I want to believe are spoken only to me
but I know better.

I turn to my side and kiss you
trace your lips with my tongue
For a moment I will believe
that you are mine

You lay with me until I drift off to sleep
Then you quietly get up
and leave me dreaming;
dreaming that this time you might stay.
post #503 of 512
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Originally Posted by Copperlocke3
nice bibba, I almost lost you while doddering in my own self-pity.
Good Job!

Copper

Thanks Copper, I enjoy your stuff too, be it poetry or prose.
post #504 of 512
ABSENCE

by: Pierre Louÿs (1870-1925)

HE has gone out, she is far from me, but I see her, for all things in the room, all pertain to her, and I, like all the rest.

This bed still warm, over which I let my lips wander, is disordered with the imprint of her form. Upon this soft cushion has lain her little head enveloped in its wealth of hair.

This basin is that in which she hath bathed; this comb has penetrated the knots of her tangled locks. These slippers beg for her naked feet. These pockets of gauze contained her breasts.

But what I dare not touch, is the mirror in which she gazed upon her hot bruises, and where perhaps remains still the reflection of her moist lips.




DANCES BY MOONLIGHT

by: Pierre Louÿs (1870-1925)

PON the soft grass, in the night, the young girls with hair of violets have all danced together, one of each pair playing the part of the lover.

The virgins said: "We are not for you." And as if they were ashamed, they hid their virginity. A satyr played upon the flute under the trees.

The others said: "We have come to seek you." They arranged their tunics about them like the dress of men; and they struggled in ecstasy while entwining their dancing legs.

Then each one, feeling herself vanquished, took her lover by the ears even as one takes a beaker by the two handles, and, the head bent forward, drank a kiss.
post #505 of 512
Thread Starter 

mother.

For my mom, who taught me to do the right thing. No matter how difficult it is. Be proud of me, mom. I love you.



mother


i held you when you were a child
i cradled you to sleep
i kept you safe, undefiled
lulled you with my heartbeat
i sheltered you far from the cold
and my love kept you warm
carried til you were too big to hold
and i prayed you safe from harm
i watched you grow into a man
so strong, you've made me proud
i know that i've done all i can
with not a moments worth of doubt
though my time is growing short
and ever shorter still
you have my love and full support
just know you always will
if i had it all to do again
my son, there is no other
greater joy one could attain
than being someones mother.
post #506 of 512
You guys and gals are leaps beyond me, but I still wanted to share some things from my school days:

Something I wrote for 12th grade English


A "cheating" Haiku

Have you ever been
Down the road of love to be
Stab'bed by the fork?

And a limerick from sixth grade:

There once was a turkey named Lou
Who became very despondent and blue.
He said what the heck
And was cut at the neck
And served as Thanksgiving Dinner for two.
post #507 of 512
Thread Starter 

the fall

i'll never regret the way that i fell
or the pain that i felt when i landed
and i'll never forget my time under loves spell
no matter just how underhanded

i'll never regret the fall that i took
or the way that i leaped so blindly
nor the way my heart ached and the way my hands shook
or the way i still thought of her kindly

i'll never forget the way that i fell
when i swore that i'd fall no more
though i'll never regret the way that i fell
just the one that i had fallen for.
post #508 of 512
Thread Starter 

heaven

my warm breath on her inner thigh
a flick of tongue
a little nibble
the salty sweet taste of sweat
quick, sharp, gasps
fingers wrapped in my hair
pushing my head ever forward.
the smell....god, that smell.
face first into a bliss beyond words.
legs shaking in ecstasy
forcing me deeper
deeper still.
moans muffled by thighs
pressed roughly against my ears.
this is my favorite place.
my own personal oblivion
eager flesh begging for my touch.
this is heaven and
i am god here.
post #509 of 512
Thread Starter 

valediction

i've spilt my blood
and shared my pain
and put it into words.
i've done more here
than i thought i could,
and i never thought that
it would go this far, or that
it would last this long.
but there is nothing more for
me to do here.
no more words for me to
share. so i leave this all
to you now. i hope that
you use this as i have,
and that it gives you the
peace that it always
gave me. treat it well.
love it like i did.
don't ever let it fade.
keep writing.
always...
keep writing.
this is my goodbye.
post #510 of 512
The Song of Wandering Aengus

William Butler Yeats, 1897


I went out to the hazel wood,
Because a fire was in my head,
And cut and peeled a hazel wand,
And hooked a berry to a thread;
And when white moths were on the wing,
And moth-like stars were flickering out,
I dropped the berry in a stream
And caught a little silver trout.

When I had laid it on the floor
I went to blow the fire a-flame,
But something rustled on the floor,
And someone called me by my name,
It had become a glimmering girl
With apple blossom in her hair
Who called me by my name and ran
And faded through the brightening air.

Though I am old with wandering
Through hollow lands and hilly lands,
I will find out where she has gone,
And kiss her lips and take her hands,
And walk among long dappled grass,
And pluck till time and times are done,
The silver apples of the moon,
The golden apples of the sun.


(one of my all time favourites - read aloud it has some real weight)
post #511 of 512

A poetry review

Hi everyone. I've been reading, but not posting. I like what's been posted lately. There are some very different offerings from the standard fare.
It's a little strange for my first post in a while, but I wanted to share a poetry review I wrote a while back of Anne Sexton's 1969 collection "All My Pretty Ones." It's a little long, but I'm told it's hard to look away.
I hope you enjoy it.

The Good, The Bad, and All the Pretty Ones

There are few people who can look at the world and see consistently either a dark paradise of pleasure, pain and perdition, or a sub-Eden of endless wonders and gratitude. It is hard to find such persons because the world in fact exists in both realms, the light and the dark. The inherent beauty of life and order and prosperity is conjoined to its bastard twin, the seemingly endless cycle of suffering, death and calamity. If one could surgically separate these two halves of the world, the aura, the spiritual connection left between them would be the poetry of Anne Sexton. Her poetry is careful to never appear too cheerful, yet it can never fully condemn the heart’s need for gladness. There seems to be a desperate loathing for hope in her writing, yet the writing itself becomes redemption. Just as the separation of twins joined by birth cannot undo that certain duality unknown by those born alone, Anne Sexton seems to carefully choose which way to shift her weight as she sits on the fence.
The two-faced reality of living is a difficult burden for any of us to bear, but what drives us toward our conclusions is often unclear. This, of course, is what we have poets for. These lines from With Mercy For The Greedy define, at least for Sexton, the only ointment for the injuries of the world.
“This is what poems are:
With mercy
For the greedy,
They are the tongue’s wrangle,
The world’s pottage, the rat’s star.”

Her poetry is her confession of sin, her prayers of both petition and praise. The stanzas of her poems are the frontlines in her battle to choose a side. Sexton longs to touch the sweet, soft, white underbelly of the world, but consistently draws her hand back from the raised and prickling hairs on the back of the beast. She sees the wonders of the world, even acknowledges God, but as she writes, “need is not quite belief.”
In All My Pretty Ones, Sexton does seem at times to step over the edge, completely, into either the bliss of ignorance or the dead man’s walk of self-absorbed bitterness. Her poem, The Hangman, is a heartbreaking picture of disappointed motherhood, in which a child is stricken near death, only to live on, cruelly.
“Supplied
With air, against my guilty wish,
Your clogged pipes cried
Like Lazarus.”

Against her guilty wish. How many times have we wished for the beauty to die? How many times have we begged the eyes of the face of God to simply turn away? It is this kind of realism in Sexton’s poetry that does not anger or hurt her reader, because she will not take a side. Indeed, she is not without her moments of joy.
I Remember is one of the few poems in this collection which lingers for its whole duration on the beautiful. At least in this collection, it is a rare moment. All of her images are of satisfied adventure, not perfect, but just right.
“…one day I tied my hair back
with a ribbon and you said
that I looked almost like
a puritan lady and what
I remember best is that
the door to your room was
the door to mine.”

It is in the lines of these poems that one sees the spirit of a person torn in two. Sexton’s poems are exploratory, consolatory, and reconciliatory. She seems to be trying constantly to make even the numbers of an impossible equation. If ever wandering spirits, lost and confused souls could communicate their frustrations, perhaps they would find their clearest voice in the words of Sexton’s poems. As she writes in Flight of the streetlights which, “sucked in the insects who had nowhere else to go,” Sexton’s poetry seems to beckon the leftover auras of broken people to sit with her on the fence, in the hope that they will not have to chose a side after all, and perhaps instead there can be a middle place, a gathering of unhappy dreamers, all her pretty ones.
post #512 of 512

Opinion

can i get an honest opinion of some stuff i wrote?

THOUGHTS
These thoughts squirm through my head
These words are unable to express
These hands can’t explain
These feet serve no use
Can i explain, can i try to do this right
Do you know what its like?
Do you know how it feel’s
That every word that flows out of your mouth,
Is just none sense in another persons ear?

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With those sad looking eyes,
and with that beautiful smile.
She laughs, and she acts
like everything was ok.

She looks so happy, how could she be hurt.
When all she feels is pain and confusion.
She stands in the mirror looks at herself,
All she sees is emptiness and pain.

With the scars on her arms and with that
Glimpse of pain, she cries herself to sleep
Hoping everything will be ok

She fills herself with hopes
That soon shatters into pieces,
Leaving her scars and a broken heart.

No, she doesn’t want to cry anymore,
No she doesn’t want to feel any pain.
All she can ask for, is everything she will never get.

Because she is the only one who can save her
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