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Comments on the CANNIBALISM stories.

post #1 of 7
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I finally got mine up. Comments on the whole lot?
post #2 of 7
Christ, Nick, that was sick.

Excellent work. That'd be a great choice for an anthology flick. Jeez, it creeped me out.

post #3 of 7
Thread Starter 
Sick?

I thought it was remarkably restrained. Could have almost not even been horror.
post #4 of 7
I dunno, it really hit me strongly at the end there. From the moment you described 'Gene's severed arms', that just kinda threw me across the room.
post #5 of 7
Thread Starter 
Fair enough. I guess the goal was to do the slow burn until right at the end. Thanks for reading.
post #6 of 7
I feel like I coulda placed it as a "Nunziata" had I not known otherwise. And that is a good thing mind you.

Congratulations on dishing up a delicious dessert to end my otherwise carnage-free lunch hour, Nick. I envy your ability to get writing done, with everything else you are tasked with. Your real-life juggling impresses me as much as the story itself.
post #7 of 7
Thread Starter 
Thanks Gen. It's not one of my best, but it was a great exercise. I plan to really freak you guys out with my BODY HORROR one.
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