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post #1 of 3
6/14/02 at 5:22pm
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This is my first short story in about five years, so I hope you enjoy, and I want your criticism!

<a href="http://www.chud.com/chudstories/stories/fault.php3" target="_blank">http://www.chud.com/chudstories/stories/fault.php3</a>
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post #2 of 3
6/14/02 at 5:26pm
Fucking hell! That's superb. Really, really great. I love CHUD Stories more and more with each new story, it's so cool to see what people on the board are capable of. That is such a cool story - really easy to visualise the locations, the characters, without you going overboard on the description (a weakness of mine). We really need to put a book together of this stuff.
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post #3 of 3
6/15/02 at 9:06am
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Thanks for the comments

I agree on the book idea. That would be very, very cool.
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