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"No Marks Here" by yt

post #1 of 14
8/16/02 at 10:26am
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Fantastically fucked up Lovecraftian nightmare. One of the best horror stories I've read here or in print in quite some time. Not only is it a really scary-ass tale, but it's also extremely well-written/executed. You could publish that shit in "Cemetery Dance" or any other place that publishes short horror tomorrow.

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post #2 of 14
8/16/02 at 10:34am
Okay, I'm going to go read this now.

And Jack, if yt's phone sex horror story isn't up on Chudstories, PM her and get her to email it to you. I read that thing in broad daylight in a room full of people and it creeped me the fuck out.
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post #3 of 14
8/16/02 at 10:56am
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Smilin' Jack Ruby:
Fantastically fucked up Lovecraftian nightmare. One of the best horror stories I've read here or in print in quite some time. Not only is it a really scary-ass tale, but it's also extremely well-written/executed. You could publish that shit in "Cemetery Dance" or any other place that publishes short horror tomorrow.

<a href="http://www.chudstories.com/stories/marks.php3" target="_blank">http://www.chudstories.com/stories/marks.php3</a>
I have to agree with u there Mr. Ruby, that was excellant.
Very descriptive and drew u in, made me feel like it was me talking and not actually reading something.
Ok that may sound stupid but thats how much i enjoyed this story.

Well done YT keep up the excellant work.
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post #4 of 14
8/16/02 at 11:04am
Excellent, excellent tale. Loved it.
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post #5 of 14
8/16/02 at 11:11am
Fantastic. Brilliant idea, expertly realised. Loved it.
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post #6 of 14
8/16/02 at 12:30pm
Grat stuff. I can't pick out any one thing that's good cause it all is.
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post #7 of 14
8/16/02 at 12:37pm
&lt;insert keanu reeves reaction&gt;

Nice work, yt.
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post #8 of 14
8/16/02 at 11:40pm
Thanks for reading it, guys. I enjoyed writing it. I've read a couple of the other stories and it's such a great collection!

ps. Here I am in beautiful Seattle and all I can think of is the Green River Killer trawling for whores along the Sea-Tac expressway... what's wrong with me?
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post #9 of 14
8/18/02 at 10:59pm
you're fucked up, thats whats wrong... or RIGHT in this case. MAN.... That was just cool. Had me freaking out. I'll never give blood again.... ok maybe I will, but still, that was a great story.
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post #10 of 14
8/20/02 at 11:15am
Ass kickingly creepy story YT. Thanks for fucking up another nights sleep for me.
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post #11 of 14
8/20/02 at 6:57pm
yeesh. and to think i just gave blood a couple weeks ago.

that could've been ME.
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post #12 of 14
8/22/02 at 12:05am
yt, I loved your story, girl. It flowed really well and it was extremely suspenseful. I loved the imagery of his last jump with a wave of blood going after him. Really creepy! eek!

I just have a question: Won't his arm that Freckles had missed a vein earlier be an opening for those living blood?
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post #13 of 14
8/23/02 at 11:28pm
Thanks for reading it, JTHM, Dennis/GOT, Dave and Voltes. The last time I gave blood, about two months ago, I was fixated on the filled bags being taken away to be locked in a room somewhere where, for all we know, they Thing out.

Voltes, there are gaffes aplenty in this one (in fact I think the snoring guy's continuity is majorly f'd up) but this paragraph happens near the end:

"Under a street light I took a tentative look under the johnny, but all my parts looked the same. No marks, not even the place where Freckles missed the vein. Not even a scar. The vessel was sealed tight."

So, it healed over.
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post #14 of 14
8/25/02 at 1:40am
yt, I've neglected to inform both you and Mr. Whitehead about my -1 SAT Score in Reading Comprehension. I got the negative score because I thought "Grade" meant the grade of my eyeglasses which I do believe now needs a higher grade!
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