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post #1 of 12
Thread Starter 
My band did a demo in one sitting. Here are some of the recordings we did. They aren't final mixes or anything. I just thought I would share them, they are pretty much one pass at vocals, drums, and guitar. If it was good enough, we kept it. We're broke and had no choice.

The first song is Drop a Line, it's a harder song. The second is Kool Aid Man, it's just a little pop song type deal. The 3rd song is I Found You Out, which is a weird song that starts slow, has a violin, and then becomes a wall o' noise. Disregard the "fire a way" line, that's not supposed to be there. Anyways, here are the tune I came to share with you:

Drop A Line

Kool Aid Man

I Found You Out
post #2 of 12

Thanks for not wasting my time.

I just listened to those three tracks and I thought they were actually pretty damn good. You need to find somebody important to listen to these that understands they need a bit of work. I hear some raw talent that needs to be unleashed. Of course, and I may be presumptious here, somebody in the bad needs a raging drug habit. Just because that's the thing to do.

Kool Aid Man - First song I listened to. I got a Weezer vibe. And that's a good thing. Kinda reminds me of those demos they used to put out all the time when they were making the green album and then maladroit. Good pop song that has some great guitar work and you can tell the vocals would really kick ass all fine tuned.

Drop A Line - Second song I listened to. Sounds like the lead vocalist likes this song. He's got this one down. Sounds good. Once again, the guitarists and drummer rule all as well. I was expecting shit when I first listened and I'm pleasantly surprised. I think this song (while good, don't get me wrong) is the worst of the three only because it sounds a little generic at this point. In a Puddle of Mudd sort of way.

I Found You Out - Third song I listened to. I like this song a lot. I listened to it three times. I'm always partial to a rolling type of song that has a good melody just in the beef of the song and switches to the chorus effortlessly. Again, it reminds me of Weezer quite a bit. Only thing I don't like about the song is it gets into the "wall of noise" part and doesn't get back to it's origins. It seems like, instead of ending hard, you need to slow up the tempo again and end it as great as it begins. That might make a killer ending song for your CD.

Overall, pretty killer demo. I hope you guys go somewhere? What's the band's name? I'd definitely go and listen if you were playing somewhere around the Seattle area. I liked the Weezer-esque song structure and I think you have some solid musicians all around. Very very cool.
post #3 of 12
Thread Starter 
Dave,

I appreciate you listening to our demos and listening so attentively. It’s very nice to be heard and appreciated on a musical level. We are gearing up for round two of recording, I will let you hear that stuff once we get it accomplished. I mostly agree with your assessment of our stuff. Once again, I cannot thank you enough for your attentiveness.

I wish some who could help us put out records would listen to our demo. I don’t have the major label dream of limos and endorsements. I would just like to be a good indie label that would allow us to tour and have real music fans listen to us. The way you are supposed to do that is by playing shows. But in our experience so far, that is not the case. Unless you are the most popular person on the block, no one shows up to see you play but your good friends. When you play a club, there’s no one there until your friends show up, therefore no one to introduce your music to. The other bands that play with us have their friends show up when they are going on. It’s very hard to get momentum if someone hasn’t heard your stuff before hand.

“I Found You Out,” was written and intended to be the final track of our album. I had a bridge written at one point, and it seemed to sort of get side tracked for this big build up or climax. At a few shows we trashed our equipment during those parts. The final arrangement of “I Found You Out” depends greatly on its final placement in the track listing. I also intend to give it another round of lyric touch ups. I was also thinking of ditching the violin for an accordion. But maybe I’m just being pretentious. I was the primary song writer on this track. It’s the most personal of the posted songs, and is my favorite as well.

“Drop A Line,” is one of our early efforts. Randy was the primary song writer on this tune. It came about in a pretty odd way. It was kind of a one thing at a time kind of deal. The original lyric “Drop A Line” was from a personal song I had written that never came about really and then Randy was going through this song and when I was taking my stab at it he picked up on that and went with it. In the end, I give him the full credit for it. I think the final product is less personal then intended and you picked up on that. I definitely hope the final product comes off less Puddle of Mudd. It’s one of our most fun songs to play live.

“Kool Aid Man” is loosely based around my love of the Catcher in the Rye and other things that would just ruin it if it was put all out there. I’m really glad you enjoyed it for what it is.

I have lots of home demos that are really cool in my opinion. I would like to post them, but my hosting is borrowed right now. My pal in Belgium uploaded them and I don’t want to bother him again any time soon. But when I get a chance, I will post some of the really extremely pop stuff and some of the out there morbid stuff. It’s kind of sad but we should have put out five albums by now, and we just have the material lying around.

Our band is called “Your Real Dad.” It came about as a joke and just kind of stuck. I think we agreed to change it though. I have a few names I really like; I just need to convince the boys to go along with it or have them convince me to go along with theirs. I actually loath the name “Your Real Dad” now that I think about it. It conveys an archetype of the rock bands I don’t care for and that we are not.

We are from Southern California. If we ever get to play in Seattle you should definitely come see us.

I hope everything I just wrote makes sense. I just got the Nirvana Box Set and stayed up until 5am listening to it. Thanks again Dave. If we ever get to put our CD out, I will mail you a copy. "Thanks for not wasting my time" is the best compliement I have ever recieved musically.
post #4 of 12
Tell me about how hellish it can be to play clubs and bars and pubs. especially on the rock circuit. it's good (in a sharing the pain sort of way) to know it just the same over there as it is in london.
I'm lucky in that i've found and am a part of a small but very freindly acoustic scene in North London. good people who care about music, who will go to everyone's elses gigs, will be happy to play with you, try new things, introduce you to new stuff. good people. Really nice to be a part of something that isn't so selfish. Your experience sounds like London's camden scene where all the new alternative bands play and they are so full of trying to be cool, and trying to 'make it' that they don't or can't care about anything else. joyless.

My lovely work computer won't let me listen to your songs at the moment. i promise to when i get home.

if you check the archives of this forum there's a thread with my band on (76 is the name). old, old demos, but hey, let's share the Star wars fans music love.
post #5 of 12

Well...

I don't have anything close to friends in the music industry, but I do have ALOT of storage on the internet that I'm not using. I also have a college degree in web design. And in all honesty, I'm bored as hell. I work a night job and I'd love to be part of something interesting, so if you want your band on the net, I'm your man.

I agree with you though, you need a new name for the band. That name is absolutely horrible. And your songs are good. Nope. No no no. Drop the name. You guys sound a little old school thus you should be The-(then something). Your Real Dad is bad. But fuck if I know.

By the way, I've listened to those three tracks about 10 times each. Love them all. I still stick with my initial review, but damn good. Way better than anything you hear on the radio.

I will, since I have no life and am bored shitless, design a website for your band and put up every music file or video file you could dream of. I literally have a Gig to work with and I need to get back into web design before I lose my soul on my high-paying---life-shattering job.

I could make you a bad ass site. For free. First, because I love making websites and I've never done a band's site before. Second, because you guys rule and I'd like to be a little part of it.

I'll start tomorrow!
post #6 of 12
Alki Dave sounds cool.
post #7 of 12

Thanks

I'm serious though. I really enjoy those demos and the only thing I can do about it is make other people see it. Thus, we need a website.
post #8 of 12
Thread Starter 
Wow! Thanks Dave! What do you need to get started? I cannot convey to you how fucking cool it is that you are doing this for us!

We are going to get together and debate a new band name.

We were thinking of using those 3 demos, maybe an acoustic demo or two, a live song, and then we would find a VHS recording of a song and send that your way if that's cool.

Once again, thank you very much. We appreciate the help with our music.
post #9 of 12

What I would need....

I guess I would just need to know what type of features you wanted on it, what type of look you'd like... band pictures are a plus. A logo. A new band name . All music and video files that you can possibly find or want to put out. Band information is good if you are down with that. Some band history possibly. Lyrics. I don't know. We could do lots of random things.

Go look around at other band's website's and make a list of all things you thought were good and how, if anything, you would change it.

I'll do the same.

I could probably get it all up and running over a few days time with a firm plan in place and all the information and audio/video available. I usually get into projects and won't stop till they are done, so once I actually start it should be fairly quick.

This would be your address: yourbandname.digitial-solstice.com.
post #10 of 12
you guys sound nice! Are you willing to travel?
post #11 of 12

HEy guyss..

First time i listen the musical bands which played by Cream and Deep Purple bands in festival stage show.

All rock and pop music play by musicians and viewers got very much enjoyed to listen them and me too....
 

post #12 of 12

Great Demo! Specially i like Drop a Line.

 


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