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post #1 of 4
5/5/05 at 7:53pm
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By Bill Darmon

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post #2 of 4
5/6/05 at 2:02pm
Bill,
I liked the story, thought I thought it was a little disjointed in the beginning. But I think that was probably because you were trying to keep hidden what the Silver Bells actually were...or are, and just refering to them as the Silver Bells took me out of the story. It definitely picked up towards the end though. When you explain the strange epedemic, and then when Charlie pukes all over Cara. Very creepy. And the brutality in general of the non-affected people towards the Silver Bells, also very creepy. That touch at the end with the two former college students with razor blades and broken bottles: excellent. That last sentence is great, too. But overall, good stuff.
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post #3 of 4
5/6/05 at 5:01pm
This is like some kinda twisted nightmare, and I'm lovin' it. I agree with bodgren in that the beginning is a little difficult to get past, but after that initial hump I was really into it. I really like this world and I could see a story of a much bigger scope being set in it - perhaps a series of stories. Good stuff.
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post #4 of 4
5/31/05 at 3:56am
Sorry to get back so late on replying to this... i used to have an old account here, but I think it's been disabled (haven't logged into it for years)- so I had to wait to get a new one approved. Thanks for the kind words and reading it in the first place... yeah, I wasn't happy with the opening. It's a big mess. I couldn't really find anything else to set the tone though.

But I'm glad it creeped both of you out...
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