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post #1 of 8
10/11/05 at 1:02am
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By Ian Arbuckle

http://chud.com/stories/4595
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post #2 of 8
10/11/05 at 2:41pm
This story should come with illustrations- not that it's not visual enough, but I think it'd help make the story a little more cogent. I don't know if you'd want to sacrifice the style by simplifying the voice- so add some pictures. Or maybe tool with the voice a little. I liked it a lot though, nice one.
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post #3 of 8
10/11/05 at 3:09pm
Which voice?
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post #4 of 8
10/11/05 at 3:31pm
Sam's. The last two letters read as denouements.
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post #5 of 8
10/11/05 at 3:51pm
Thanks for the feedback. Sam was a different type of protagonist than those I usually write about.
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post #6 of 8
10/11/05 at 5:13pm
I like the letter format. I'm writing something in a dairy style and it's a huge challenge. Ya done good.
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post #7 of 8
10/11/05 at 5:28pm
Dairy style? Like, you're letting it go sour before it gets any good?

I agree that it's a challenge; it's always a challenge to limit the narrator, for me. And the epistle format is even more limited than plain old first-person. Thanks for the encouragement.
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post #8 of 8
10/11/05 at 5:42pm
D'oh. Diary style. But then you knew that.
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